Sunday, March 25, 2012

All adults should live without their parents

I am going to talk about my opinion about adults living with their parents. 

In my opinion, adults should not live with their parents. It will not help them to become adults. I know that their parents will teach them how to live, but if they live with their parents, they will not have time to practice and have confidence. 

First of all, they need to grow up by themselves. If they live with their parents, they will lose opportunity to grow up their skills which they live themselves. They might not cook, clean, wash their clothes and so on. After their parents pass away, it will be difficult to live without their parents. They need to practice helping themselves. 

Then, they will not solve their problems. If they have some difficult situations or emergency, their parents will help them, and then they will never know how to solve their problems by themselves. They should know if they have some problems, they have to consider solving. It will help them to grow up their hearts.

 Finally, adults must give their parents back what their parents have done for them. Their parents have helped them such as paying money, feeding, taking care and so on. If they have become adults, their parents have gotten old. Their parents need help to do something. How adults can give their parents back is cooking, cleaning, washing their clothes and so on. I think that it is a duty what we have to do to our parents.
 
 In conclusion, adult have a right to grow up and help their parents. We can’t depend on our parents forever. That’s why all adults have to live without their parents for growing up their heart and becoming excellent adults.

5 comments:

  1. Excellent writing, Hikaru! You have discussed several reasons why adults should not live with their parents and your writing is convincing.

    I also liked how you added a paragraph about how adults can give back to their parents.

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  2. I agree with you. I will try to get ready to live by my own without my parent's help when I go back to Korea.

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  3. yeah I also need to help my parents...that's why I am here because i've trained the house keeping at my host house;P

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  4. I agree with you even though I live with my parents now. I will live by myself in the future.
    Also, let me know when you live by yourself:D

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  5. Nice writing Hika! I think besides it´s so much fun to live without the parents! so it´s a good choice no matter what!

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